well, i dont think its that bad at all. all you need is lighting on surfaces not just edges, you got the blue and red lighting, you could add more cool blue light on the top, and you could also boost up the contrast in few of the areas to make them stand out in space. get a good balance between two colors.
dont want to lecture, but in exchange, pls tell me how to make straight lines in painter
Yeah thanks . In my next Env I'll light the whole surfaces . Ehm straight lines . All you need is training . I don't juse any ruler . For very long strokey I use Shift but it's rare . In the future I won't focuse on straight lines but on good Lightning and Details .